NWS Walmart #49

[labonte21]

this is one of the cars I am running the SRD NNS Offline League this year.
Let me know what you guys think and please give me tips.

Base by me. Numbers from SRD. Logos from Google, SRD, and BOTW. Render from TenOrs.

 

[SAL]

Looks Good! You may want to change the Chevy logo on the hood to blue, since it gets lost on the white background. Otherwise it look good! Nice job!

 

[labonte21]

Thanks!

 

[LarryFoyt50]

Here some tips that might help you.

Dergees on a car.

Signature: 7
Side Number: 1.5-2.5
Side logo: 3.5-5

Wireframe will help you a lot.
Make sure you have visible colors for like Chevy.

Hope this helps. You have came a long way.

 

[SimDesigners]

I'm sort of in a "critiquey" mood this morning, so bear with me

I think what you have is off to a good start- everything I'm listing below is how I would approach it:

• I would move the blue dividing the car down a tad. Doing this is going to help with two things: 1) Your Walmart logo won't be cut in half, and then you don't need to outline it (which Walmart never does). It'll help it stand out much better on the quarter panel. 2) It will help with how you have it lined up around the front wheel well, where it looks a bit funky. I would also make sure to have the slope of the line follow the bottom of the side window- it'll look a bit neat and cleaner.

Also, when you do move the line down, it's probably going to move down on the TV panel as well. Easy fix would be to make the http://www.bethematch.org URL blue and move it into the white. Should stand out pretty nicely then.

• I would give the Walmart logo and Wounded Warrior logo a bit more space from each other on the quarter panel. Right now, it just feels like they're a bit close and sort of "running over" each other. I would also consider outlining the WWP logo in white a bit just to help it when it's against the blue background at the bottom.

• Consider making the number a bit smaller. My rule of thumb is to never have it extend behind the B-pillar, and I like to have some space below it just before the side skirts. Also, if you use LarryFoyt's suggestions for rotating above, you'll see that it'll flow a lot better with the blue line (if you slope it and move it down like I suggested above).

• Last- it looks like you rendered it on a Toyota body- not a Chevy one

Hopefully I'm not intimidating you with all the advice- it's just that. Take what you will from it! Bottom line- just keep painting and keep it fun! You're doing great.